Book Review: My Futanari Stepsister – Real women have a lot more than curves

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“He’s also finding it hard to breath with a mouthful of penis. Women are complicated!”

My Futanari Stepsister, Location 426

The Plot

Daniel is a stereotypical, nerdy, eighteen year old, reclusive, virgin, Asian, gamer. And he is stuck at home with his strangely cruel stepsister and her four hot college friends. Daniel is in love with Elle though. To him, she is perfection personified. For the most part, she seems to like him too but in order to stay part of the “in crowd” she hides her feelings with the occasional cruel jab.

After hours of gaming, Daniel eventually heads down stairs for some pizza, upon his sister’s invitation. While eating a slice, he notices just how beautiful and exceedingly hot these young women are. He’s caught ogling and rushes off to his room, mortified and extremely turned on. The girls burst into his room, cajoling him and making fun of his hard on. Eventually taking mercy on the poor boy, the girls decide to take it upon themselves to teach Daniel the ways in which real women like to give and  receive pleasure.

Writing Style

Mr Oenemal writes pretty well. There are no glaring grammatical issues with this story. There were one or two things that irritated me, such as the excessive use of parentheses. The majority of the text held in parentheses could have been incorporated into the narrative with the precise use of commas. The frequent bracketing of phrases and thoughts actually broke up the flow of the narrative for me.

Other than this minor irritation, I found no real issues with the technical skill behind the story.

“Daniel has been pulling his penis for the last hour. Browsing through his favourite illustrations of various sex scenes and pinups— demons pounding angels, ninja-cats having sex with futa-pirates, tentacles making love to anything within reach— and he’s getting close to the edge.” Locations 96-98

Ella sees him there and flashes him a little smile; her tongue then creeps back out, and is pushed back under Sarah’s balls, where he can now see a pussy! The pink, frilly lips of a pussy!” Locations 323-325

“Kylie pushes inside and immediately starts to move with opposing thrusts, so that Alice is bouncing between the two female bodies— one accepting her hard meat, the other delving inside to see what can be found. Kylie calls out between the moans, ‘Daniel, this is called the “love train”.’ God, why do they have to have a name for everything, he wonders while he looks up at the most amazing thing ever: boobs and balls swinging; pussies spreading for long, thick poles; hands gripping onto round hips.” Locations 532-537

The Review

On the whole, I enjoyed this story. Considering the subject matter, and the usual tone that these sorts of short stories usually take, this wasn’t excessively smutty or lewd. There is quite a bit of sex in the story and it represent more than just the futa fetish advertised by the name and cover. There are elements of humiliation, orgasm deprivation, girl-on-girl, men eating cum, and a few other favourites. Even with all these different preference and fetishes, the story wasn’t gross. At times, Daniel’s responses seemed juvenile but this is entirely understandable considering his age and the fact that he’s never even kissed a girl. I could have done with two fewer people in the scenario, as the room felt a bit crowded at times.

If anything, this story is actually rather tame. The women initially come across as petty and cruel but they don’t humiliate Daniel to the level that I expected them to.This may still put some readers off the story. The sex was pretty erotic and complimented by the dialogue between the characters. My biggest issue with this story is the stepsister angle. It feels forced, and in this way it seems like it was simply thrown in for the sake of the stepsister fetish. No doubt it made an easy vehicle for the rest of the story and the futa fetish but the stepsister is not the protagonist’s primary love interest.

Having said that, I would still recommend this story if you’re already into futa erotica or if you’re looking to try it out. My Futanari Stepsister is a hell of a lot better than the majority of the trash out there.

My rating: 4/5

Buy My Futanari Stepsister on Amazon.

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2 responses to “Book Review: My Futanari Stepsister – Real women have a lot more than curves

    • I really like the futa-on-male dynamic. Traditional ideas of power play don’t really apply. This is not a very long story and it’s got its problems but I think it’s worth the read, especially in seeing where you stand on the matter.

      Thanks for the visit and happy reading!

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