Book Review: Hubby to Hussy: Pegging My Cross-dressing Husband – Adverbs! How do they work?!

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“Luckily, he was already so lithe and feminine in stature…”

Hubby to Hussy: Pegging my Cross-dressing Husband (Locations 118-119)

The Plot

From Amazon: It’s time for my girly husband to fulfill my most forbidden fantasy…

Lane has been the perfect submissive husband, and I’ve spent the past year fulfilling his fantasy of watching me with big, alpha men. But now, it’s time to turn the tables a bit. When out shopping one day, I noticed a slim little cocktail dress had accidentally been put on a male mannequin and it REALLY got me thinking. I started to notice just how gorgeous my husband’s auburn hair and green eyes could be if paired with the right girly outfit.

I snuck the dress home and convinced him to try it on. One thing lead to another and suddenly my submissive husband has gone from Lane, to Laney. I’ve been waiting for this moment for a while and now she’s in for a BIG, hard surprise that’s strapped to my waist…

Writing Style

I’m so tired of unimaginative, first person writing. I’m loathed to say that this is not the worst writing I have ever come across, but it’s just so boring. Tepid. Uninspired. Like a limp handshake.

“How are you supposed to tell your husband that you not only want him to dress up like a girl but um… get pounded by a big, rubber cock strapped around your waist.” (Locations 14-15)

‘“No,” I whispered, lowering my voice. “I’m here for you. I’m tired of fucking your wife. I want to fuck her pretty little husband, instead. She has such a beautiful, fuckable mouth, after all.”’ (Locations 193-195)

“I grabbed my cock, slick with lube, and poked the tip against Lane’s tight opening. Slow but unflinching, I dove my tool just inside and smiled with uncontrolled bliss as Lane moaned out loud and indulgent.” (Locations 266-267)

Jane Futa refused to let her writing be grammatically correct by employing adverbs, and she somehow reduced femdom and cuckolding to dog commands. This further validates my laziness assessment. It was almost as if the author knew a little bit about a number of fetishes, sexual preferences and lifestyles and decided to just throw it all into one short story. So there are elements of femdom, cuckolding, with a dollop of pegging and cross-dressing, finished off with some humiliation and gender bending. I don’t have a problem with any of these, they just weren’t well represented in the story.

The Review

Ultimately, there was nothing sexy, steamy or erotic about this story. It was a really cheesy porn scene with little substance. Honestly, I wasn’t expecting much when I went in but it still managed to let me down. I think the lack of understanding regarding the different fetishes and sexual play portrayed was the biggest turn off. The characters are ordinary and were given pedestrian dialogue. If you have an interest in any of the things that I have just mentioned, do not read this story because it will either give you the entirely wrong idea of what these fetishes are, and that can be troublesome.

My rating: 0/5

Buy Hubby to Hussy: Pegging My Cross-dressing Husband on Amazon.

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I’m still looking for good stories portraying pegging, cuckolding and femdom so any recommendation would be appreciated.

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